Wednesday, April 11, 2007

UNITED WE STAND…. DIVIDED WE FALL

In the dense forest there was a lake where many ant colonies thrived, in particular on the rocks and mud. The ant colonies constantly battled against each other, for more land or for land once owned by them. Once a grand empire had dominated most of the moss grounds, the rock islands, the Balkant regions and the far of lands to the east. This empire fell when the leaders died, now it is divided amongst cunning generals who wish for the glory the leaders once had. Yet glory seems far from reach at this time. The leaders of the small remnants have gathered in a grand audience chamber to discuss the future of the people.

“Brothers, relatives, friends. We have gathered here to talk about diplomacy, to talk about becoming one and about peace. Since the death of our queen Helen, our empire has been divided, we’ve returned to our old ways of fighting each other. Are we to overcome our differences ever?” Asked senator Antipatro
The senator glanced at the diplomats
“The Romants are a growing threat to the west. They are threatening to destroy what’s left of Helens Empire.” He pointed at the diplomats and said “I ask you, will we unite as brothers to defeat the Romants?”
A murmur spread amongst the diplomats.
“You’re a fool to think WE; the Spartants will ever unite with those Thessants! Stated a Spartant diplomat.
“Yeah, we Cretants refuse to join with those barbarous Pontants” argued another
“Order! Brothers, let me inform you that the Romants have a queen! Surely you know what happens to an ant kingdom with no queen?” Antipatro yelled. “Tomorrow the Romants will attack the Epirants at Apontant city. Those who wish the Epirants to gain victory join with king Pyrrus’s army. Those who don’t can stay back and watch our ant kingdom obliterate.

The next day king Pyrrus organized the defenses of his city. For hours he was waiting for allies to turn up. Time was running out. Would his brothers come to his aid? It seemed unlikely as the Romants had set up a camp just of the edge of the lake near Apontant city.
An hour past and to Pyrrus’s delight a large ally army had approached his fort. The army was a combination of soldier-ants, phalanx-formation warrior ants and tame lizards. Its leader, King Memnon approached Pyrrus.
“Greetings king Pyrrus, I king Memnon of Akropantia have come to help in this battle against the Romants.”
“Many thanks Memnon. Do you know if the others will come?”
“No, unfortunately, the Cretants are fighting with the Rhodants, Cantith with Boetiant, Thessants with Pontant and so on. You see, even if we do win, Pyrrus, the rest of the states would be even more convinced that we need no unity.”
“So either way, we both lose.” Stated Pyrrus

The Romants began to advance towards the city, many legions to fight the small forces of king Pyrrus and Memnon. The day looked pretty grim for the divided empire of Helen. A trumpet sounded and the battle started. Both sides clashed with enormous force. Helant versus Romant. The soldier ants fought first against the Romants and the phalanx warriors from the sides. It seemed that the forces of the two kings had out-flanked the Romants but they sent reinforcements just in time to further the attack. Captain Idas of the Helant army, ordered that the lizards be released. These lizards began to trample and devour the Romant legionaries. They began to run amok, after seeing the great size of the Romant army, killing even its own soldiers. The Romants ordered their slingers to hurl rocks at the lizards. Eventually all the lizards were killed. More Romant reinforcements arrived and crushed the Helant army. King Pyrrus died amongst his slain warriors. Memnon signaled a retreat to the remaining of his army. The Romants seized the city and claimed it theirs. They had gained victory.

News of the defeat spread to the rest of the Helant states. It wasn’t a good idea to have remained divided and that caused the fall of the Helant Empire.

1 comment:

CeeJay said...

I think your allegory works really well. You provide us with a believable setting and references to ant queens and so on keep it within the ant metaphor you have chosen. I like the way you have integrated the word ant into so many proper nouns - its amusing as well as effective in keeping with the ant army theme.
I think you have transferred the historical events to this setting well. I really enjoyed a lot of the dialogue - which had both a historical and mythic feel to it - appropriate to your classical themes. You've also made good use of varied sentence structure and length - something you could comment on in your author commentary.